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my heart
break free
from this heaven and
soars through
this sea of skylarks

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The following comments are for "Break Free From Heaven"
by FireFly747

Flying All the Higher
Let go your belongings...
Those things that hold you down
And fly even higher
Much closer to the Heart...
Nearer to the Soul

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 2, 2011 )

This is really good and jumps out for you!

( Posted by: naomidavies [Member] On: October 3, 2011 )

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