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Autumn Love is mature and warm
Surviving Spring and Summerís Storms

First love blooms in Springís first kiss
Young hearts lost in nature's bliss

The Bird of Youth flies high and strong
Spring is when we hear his song

Summer sun brings reality
And no assurance of constancy

The Rose is Queen in Summerís Sun
But falls to earth when seasonís done

Winter is lonely, dark and cold
Without Autumn's love, as we grow old.

Copyright©2011 Beatrice Boyle
(All rights reserved).

Grandma Bea

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The following comments are for "Autumn Love (Couplets)"
by Beatrice Boyle

when seasonís done
Great poem. It'll be great reference material when future generations want to know about the seasons before they upped and changed on us.

Earth crust displacement. Look it up.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: September 29, 2011 )

Changes !
Thanks Francisco...I'm afraid I won't be around to see all these profound changes that are surely coming (and rather swiftly I see.)

I'm just annoyed that some fabulous "youth" pill will be discovered fifteen minutes after I'm gone!!!! lol.


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: September 30, 2011 )

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