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Let us dance to the rythem of the time bomb tickin' away.
It's gonna blow and melt us
Any day, anyday.
Tick tick,tock tock. Tick tock,tock tick.
You can smell it all around you,
This world is so very sick.
Yet, I swirl and I twirl and
I look at you and smile-
If only for today. If only for awhile.





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by damifino

Bomb the World With Love
Wouldn't it be nice if the only bombs were those armed with affection...? And the only collateral damage was Love...?

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: September 24, 2011 )





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