Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

I am a parasite
Of poetry
Sucking the blood of others

For inspiration
Is a disease
Passing it on to another

But death seeks
The fallen poet
Digging a grave for the afflicted

Be the word of Spirit
In soulful prose
Rising ever above the sickness

------
� G.Dean Stevens


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Sick Diction"
by awhippingflame

And when felled...
the flowers that grow upon the grave will inspire another. There is never an end of the artist.

( Posted by: damifino [Member] On: September 23, 2011 )

Sick Diction
Wow! What a way with words!

( Posted by: serenastargazr [Member] On: September 26, 2011 )

sucking off the main
in poetry much like in everything else in life, inspiration is copied and doesnt come straight from the creative main. :)

( Posted by: Shaza89 [Member] On: March 12, 2013 )

When a Urinal Becomes a Fountain
Knock a hole in the creative main
And become a fountain of creativity

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 4, 2013 )

sick
could you imagine what would happen if there was an outbreak of this illness?

( Posted by: fbomber125 [Member] On: July 5, 2014 )

RE: Sick Diction
An interesting and enjoyable piece; it explains a lot; I must be doing okay, since you keep coming back.

-Joe Breunig
Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory
http://amzn.to/1ffo9YZ

( Posted by: jjbreunig3 [Member] On: September 10, 2015 )

I Have A Gut for Poetry
I do what consumers do best...
digest

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: September 10, 2015 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: