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Here it comes again,
the last of those memories.
Here it comes again,
whispering of the trees.

I have melted for you,
been through all the pain.
I have blackened for you,
welcome to miss insane.

chorus-

What new lies have you brought for me?
What new visions are left here to see?
Wasted four years on a picture of you,
how dare I expect something better than you?


Tomorrow, oh tomorrow,
here's a new day I need.
tomorrow, yes, tomorrow,
swallowed by your greed.

Last words from you,
good-bye isn't the way.
Last words from you,
I know you'll be back someday.

chorus

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krazi-Renee


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The following comments are for "You Did This To Me"
by krazirenee

Love it
I love it I would love to hear it one day. It would be a kick-a** song.
You should make a demo and send it to a music producer. Or make a portfolio of all your songs and send them.

( Posted by: lovesessence [Member] On: July 22, 2003 )

Wonderful
This is my favorite of any of the lyrics that I've read so far on lit.org... it reminds me of the seniments of something I might write, so perhaps I'm a bit biased... but I really loved it!

( Posted by: vegibrgr [Member] On: November 12, 2003 )





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