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My home is my castle thatís what I'm told
why should I move now I have gotten old
Neighbours are perfect grass is pure green
can always boast about the places Iíve been

My home is so perfect but bills are a pain
the end of the month itís always the same
Chauffer the gardener the cook who is funny
they all loiter round me looking for money

My home is so handy itís just down the street
the Pub and the Chemist Shop right at my feet
I still take the car because walkingís a chore
then to go any further would be such a bore

My home is perfect for it has all that I need
A bedroom a kitchen and somewhere to feed
Living room so comfy I get stuck in the chair
but now I am old why would anyone care

If you listen to me long enough I can lower your IQ

I came into this world with nothing,
through careful management I've got most of it left.

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The following comments are for "My Old Sweet Home"
by Fairplay

Perfect Home cont

My Home is perfect for here is no drama
no bosses no bores no Barrack Obama
My TV just perfect under total control
a world imploding while I just grow old

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: September 6, 2011 )

Perfect Home Mirror Image
My home so is perfect mirrors and all
looked into one on the hallway wall
I'm getting younger my life reversed
energetic things I still have thirst

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: September 7, 2011 )

My Old Sweet Home- My Comments
Dear respected Fairplay,

You can write so skillfully
As home helps live confidently
You can create an A-class write
As home teaches you what is right
Your home has given you fine smile
I can notice it now without fail.

With best wishes, Thanking you,Yours truly,



( Posted by: mvvenkataraman [Member] On: September 19, 2011 )

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