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Tired of sleep..
..the way I can hear the dull hollow in my head..
..as my ear rests on the pillow..
..with the slow beating of my heart..
..keeping time in between tocks of a ticking clock..
..the only other sounds are my own..

I wonder, if I didn't need it, if I'd ever sleep again.
Instead of waking somewhere halfway in between,
An abstract dream and a..

Daily routine.

Always tired.

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Adam J. Dutcher

I am...


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by AdFunk

Cerebral Disobedience
Seek Peace
Amid the Disquiet
For...
Silence
Never
Incited
A Riot

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: September 4, 2011 )





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