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She was a marvel of nature,
But, she was of this earth,
She had a smile
That would melt ice cream,
And she made my heart
For her love thirst.
Her humor was twisted,
Her body divine,
Her name was Lisa,
And I wanted her to be mine!

I lost my breath,
As she moved around,
From city to city,
From town to town.
She wasn't ready to settle,
No! She wanted more
Than pretty jewelery
And other tokens of love
That I given her before.

Her humor was twisted,
Her body divine,
Her name was Lisa,
And I wanted her to be mine.

Only mine!



------
Ronald Peter Ciras


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The following comments are for "Lighter than air."
by moroccanron

Twisted Lisa
Her Love went down like a shot of Tequila...
No salt...no lemon
No tears

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: September 5, 2011 )





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