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Here Im sitting alive
yet totally decayed
from the inside
before I became this
sitting living dead
I was happy
I got better
the light
was shining from my eyes
my smile
for everyone to see
but then all of a sudden
something or someone
thought 'DAMN!
That Fucking light in that Bitch eyes
is Fucking blinding me
and that smile and laughing
of that Bitch
are hurting my Mother fucking ears
and with that thought
my happiness shattered
because of some
Dumb witted ignorant fuck!
Who just didn't want to see me happy
after I finally crawled
out of that shit hole
with help
I was out
and some
Bitch ass mother fucker!
Throws me back
faster and harder
and with that Fucking slam
to the ground
I feel like Im totally broken
I cant even crawl any more
and if I'm being carried
I scream because of the pain
here I'm sitting alive
yet totally decayed
again

With all my 1500 bones crushed!

------
S.k


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