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In shedding all the pretensions
I'm here ripping up the fences
While exploring new dimensions
And taking down all the defenses

In splitting all the conventions
I'm just here tearing up the town
Doing complete new reinventions
Coming back round letting my hair down

It's just so fundamental and not just incidental
Just completely monumental it's just so continental
And oh so completely, completely sentimental
This feeling, this felling called love it's not some silly rental

It's just so instrumental and not coincidental
It's all experimental beyond transcendental
And oh so completely, completely sentimental
This feeling, this feeling called love it's just like being mental


In the peeling of the layers
Just clearing up some breathing space
Ready for a new set of players
And yeah finding me a whole new base

In expanding concentrations
Without intense depravity
And resisting all temptations
Beyond the center of gravity

It's just so fundamental and not just incidental
Just completely monumental it's just so continental
And oh so completely, completely sentimental
This feeling, this felling called love it's not some silly rental

It's just so instrumental and not coincidental
It's all experimental beyond transcendental
And oh so completely, completely sentimental
This feeling, this feeling called love it's just like being mental

It's just like being mental
It's just like being mental
It's just like being mental
It's just like being mental



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The following comments are for "IT'S JUST LIKE BEING MENTAL"
by MTMarshall

mental case
This sounds like part prison break, part new awakening, while seemingly conveying a hard-won intimacy through a kind of objective introspection. I can almost hear parts of this being performed by Fleetwood Mac. Your use of rhyme is very thoughtful. Thank you for sharing this.

( Posted by: metrozol [Member] On: March 6, 2012 )

T'S JUST LIKE BEING MENTAL
Thank you very much ..very glad you enjoyed the piece..and you hearing parts of it being preformed by Fleetwood Mac is in it self one awesome compliment....:))))))

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: March 23, 2012 )





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