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My heart has died
With our baby inside
Lost again in a pool of blood Stinking
With this dark alley
Lit only by the croosroads caution light
And I taste salt as her tears stream,
And copper as I bite back my screams,
And I choke,"PLEASE GOD, NO!!" as I
Gently picked her up and ran-
First this way, then that-
But I knew not THE WAY.
And I can't stop her. No.
I can't stop her from dying too.

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The following comments are for "Death in the Dark"
by damifino

The Dark Embrace
Death comes without warning to snatch you in the dark...
Or sometimes with blinking caution lights...

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 19, 2011 )

That Has No Face
At least no Tunnel Light? (or awhppingflame???lol)
Thank You. This site is made fun by writers such as you.

( Posted by: damifino [Member] On: August 20, 2011 )

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