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I am blinded by four suns
I canít tell you much
Shape is multiplied beyond recognition
Shadow non-existent
I am blinded by four suns
Reflected by a trillion salt crystals
All colors die here
Motion died here
I am blinded by four suns
This landscape is dead
This is death planet
This desert is lightís graveyard
I am blinded by four suns
Iím afraid I canít tell you much
About the giant figures in the distance





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The following comments are for "Lumina"
by Paradox

Heighten Your SPF
Those "giant figures in the distance" are huge bottles of sun screen...or at least...let's hope they are

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: August 18, 2011 )

Blinded
And if you got any in your eyes it really wouldn't matter.

( Posted by: damifino [Member] On: August 23, 2011 )





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