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You may have put me down
I have picked myself off the ground
I am still here
I'm in good cheer
I really don't care, What you thought of me
Just let me be
I am not even thinking of you
Not even feeling blue
I'm not this young girl
And I'm ready to travel the world
I'm still here
Being home with my family,whom are so dear

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by louiemary

by giving him credit, u give him power...

( Posted by: PAPALAS [Member] On: August 24, 2011 )

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