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Perfect
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Kayame
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- published: August 10, 2011
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Perfection is I
Lucid; intangible
An idea
Perfection is me
Nonexistent; ghostly
Tormenting you
I am a fallacy
a pseudo-ideal
To never be obtained
Always fingertips away
From mastery
I am fake
Just like you
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