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Mrs. Claus's Christmas In August
The work is done, and it was fun,
the elves are taking naps,
Sneaky snores, from all the chores,
but Pooky's runnin twenty laps;
Rudolphs light's out for the night,
and Boopsie is so glad,
the elves now rest, what they do best,
wore out from all the fun they've had,
and Mrs. Claus, is glad because
Santa's MasterCard she found,
she's hooked the reindeer to the sleigh
and Cleo Claus is goin' to town!


Boopsie, Sneaky, Pooky and Showe all reg pending....the story developes....

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VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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The following comments are for "Mrs. Claus"
by veebdosa

Mrs Claus
Very good and very funny!
Very creative and really good reading. Sounds like Mrs.Claus is having fun.
I think it is a very good poem.

( Posted by: louiemary [Member] On: August 18, 2011 )

Claus it delight
This poem is well done and catchy too. I like it better than some of your others. It seems you worked on it and polished it before posting. Kids of all ages will like this. I'd like to see more. Hope it develops for you.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: August 18, 2011 )





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