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I don't know, but they tell me it's not so bad being dumb
sometimes. Reminds me of my kid brother, he fancied himself a
real poet way back then. He wrote a few poems and gave them to
Grandma and she gave him 5$ man he thought he was king of the
poets, but Janie our sister was a real poet and he knew it, too. Well
Janie wanted that 5$ to buy a dress for a party and Bobby wasn't
too bright even if he did write poems. She got her some bird
droppings and rolled them into some balls and told Bobby what he needed
to write really good poems was a smart pill. He said "where do I
get one," and she said she had one left over and would sell it to
him for 5$ even, and guarentee it would make him smarter. Ok he said
and gave her the five bucks. so she said to chew the smart pill up
real good and swallow it and he did and made a ugly face and said
'that smart pill tastes just like bird dookie!!!
and she said "See you're getting smarter already..."

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VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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