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She has octopus eyelashes and an unlucky charm
(I swear I saw motion itself giving me a wink)
She has alien skin and an odorless smell
(It's not that impossible really)
She has silicon flesh
(Artificial but true)
She has honey blood
(Actually it tastes rather bitter)
She has phosphorescent hair and a halo
(Itís easier to find her in the dark when drunk)
She has eyes colored violet most violent of colors




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The following comments are for "Atomic Angel"
by Paradox

Angel
I liked it but it seems a piece rather than a finished compisition. More please!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: August 11, 2011 )





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