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Before we met
I was happy
slightly depressed
but still happy
I loved to live
when we met
it could only go up
it did
when we dated
it flew
like a rocket to the sky
I was so happy
so lucky
so lively
with you
you made it happen
then my little niece
was finally born
luck and happiness
was all around me
it could not get any better
and I didn't
I fell
and my luck and happiness
shattered in to a million pieces
I fell through it
and all those shards
cutting me
some even stayed in me
like Kai when
he got a piece of the mirror
stuck in his eye
for after that little
yes very decisive moment
in time
I became like Kai
there was no good any more
only bad
wherever I went
whatever I saw
it was never good
always bad
and like Kai
I almost dragged you
to your end
but unfortunately for me
unlike Kai
there is no happy ending
I have to many shards
stuck in my body
it doesn't mather how many
tears I shed
because tears
do not move through my body
and so the shards stay
maybe with time
it will dissolved within my body
but until then
I will not be happy
I will not have luck
I will not date
I will not do anything

Until The Shards Are All Gone


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