Lit.Org - a community for readers and writers Advanced Search
 




Average Rating
0.00

(0 votes)

You must login to vote

TOUCHING EYES
There she is.
With her eyes
her touching eyes
that touch everything in you.
There she is
with her smile
her biggest smile
the smile that she saves for you.

And she has searching eyes.
reaching eyes and locking eyes and touching eyes,
that touch everything in you.
She'll be the life of you.
The hope of you the light of you the love of you,
she'll find all the love in you.

There she is.
Telling you, showing you
things that you never knew.
There she is.
With her smile
her biggest smile
that brings out the best in you.


See video with some really pretty girls at this youtube address....

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=33mL9sFgCdA

or goto Youtube and search veebdosa

------
VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


Related Items

Comments

The following comments are for "Touching Eyes Lyric"
by veebdosa

Ugly Amy, 27
Drunk. Lyric thief. Plagerist. Junky. Loser and showed it every day of her celebrity life in everything she did, including the way she died, self inflicted suicide, which the English, in their immense knowledge or lack of it, can not understand. She killed herself. Harry Carey. She took the easy way out because of her lifestyle. Loser.

Would YOU want your daughter to grow up like such a person?

That is reality.

I see nothing good here, the way she ended her life is the cowards way.

( Posted by: VeeBdosa [Member] On: July 28, 2011 )





Add Your Comment

You Must be a member to post comments and ratings. If you are NOT already a member, signup now it only takes a few seconds!

All Fields are required

Commenting Guidelines:
  • All comments must be about the writing. Non-related comments will be deleted.
  • Flaming, derogatory or messages attacking other members well be deleted.
  • Adult/Sexual comments or messages will be deleted.
  • All subjects MUST be PG. No cursing in subjects.
  • All comments must follow the sites posting guidelines.
The purpose of commenting on Lit.Org is to help writers improve their writing. Please post constructive feedback to help the author improve their work.


Username:
Password:
Subject:
Comment:





Login:
Password: