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When you cannot breathe
Itís hard to speak

I always thought
That there should be mourning at birth
And laughter at funerals

When you cannot breathe
Itís hard to speak

Life is not about living at all
But rather
Itís about how you die

When you cannot breathe
Itís hard to speak

We are born to die and maybe
Just maybe
We die to be born again

When you cannot breathe
Itís hard to speak

The doctor cutting the umbilical cord
Wears a white mask
But still he is an executioner

When you cannot breathe
Itís hard to speak

I saw death the instant I was born
I cried



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The following comments are for "Ash"
by Paradox

death
I liked the style of this.I liked where it was going for the most part. I'm not sure of the conclusion though.

williamhill

( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: July 27, 2011 )





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