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I have become the shadow
That paces unseen and unheard.
Behind your glow and halo
And courting the cute hallow.

I am behind every door
Watching watching watching.
And as your every step echoes hard
I follow follow follow.

Footprints in the mud
Broken tree branches
Subtle scent on the wind
As I hunt for glimpsing chances.

Always are you the spectre that was
The missing hint of life
The swell after the storm
That never never never.

And as I speak to the dark,
The shadow that I am
Calls the darkness his friend
And I ran ran ran.

Near, but near is not enough
Hold you tight and hard
But the remains of you presence are now
Scarred scarred scarred.


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Remember my friend, despite all you are, all we are, the universe will tick on, long past our departure.


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