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sight

5-6-6

lake ontario
as the warm orange sun
sets on a clear evening

smell

6-2-6

fresh hazelnut coffee
brewing
late, one autumn morning

touch

4-10-3

soft fingertips
gently massaging the bottom of your
naked foot

hearing

7-2-7

the length of a sharp knife blade
being
dragged slowly down a chalk board

taste

9-2-3

a leaf of maple sugar candy
melting
on your tongue



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