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There was a multi dimensional struggle. Heaven's First War. The (god) that created us is no longer in charge. We belong to another. There were "rules of things" that was how this reality was to be governed. The rules could not change because that would change this reality and so not being us. This would explain alot of the destruction intimated in the Books, mankind's propensity for doom. There IS a (god) there. Call It what you will. He just either doesn't give a shit or can't do anything within the confines of the "rules of things".

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The following comments are for "The Rules of Things"
by Robert Walker

Robert Walker
You offer no proof in the second line to your essay. And you offer no proof in most of your essay which would make it an opinion piece, I think. I would like to see you expand upon your opinion though so that I could give a thoughtful and proper response and comment. You are a good writer so I'll be looking forward to it.


( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: July 3, 2011 )

Actually I was close to god at the time I had this thought flash through my mind, and was lucky enough to get it on paper. So... no thoughts no proofs, just...

( Posted by: Robert Walker [Member] On: July 3, 2011 )

No cigar, either.
It matters not. When you write this good, you should get what you got, and expect no check in the mail.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: July 5, 2011 )

I don't understand your comment.

( Posted by: Robert Walker [Member] On: July 6, 2011 )

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