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Her happiness is contagious
her sadness, abysmal grief.
Seeking rainbows of solace
to bring her sweet relief,
from the pain that lies within
the smoky mirrors of her mind.
imprinted in indelible ink
carved in the sands of time.
Hollow shells of sorrow and deceit,
jewels gleaming in the sun.
Bones scattered at her feet
leave nowhere else to run.
Trapped in hell's illusion,
she struggles with belief
that there is something greater
just beyond her reach.


------
Yetunde


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The following comments are for "Bt-Polar"
by MuddyBraun

Sock It To My Soul
This piece struck me with a hammering blow to the mid-section of my Soul...but I'll live

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 29, 2011 )

Without a doubt
You will indeed...live.
Thank You for reading my work, after reading some of yours, I am even more grateful.
Namaste

( Posted by: MuddyBraun [Member] On: July 7, 2011 )

Cosmic Ramifications
See my Heart swell
See my Soul inflate
See my World widen
See the Universe expand

Thank You

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: July 9, 2011 )

Minding the Universe.
Love the attitude Yetunde...nice to know you're keeping tabs on the universe for us.

Awesome write!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: July 10, 2011 )

All in a day's work!
Thank You, Bea. For reading my work and making me laugh! As a matter of fact, I'm stalking the Universe. I hope it doesn't mind...the cake said "eat me", what was I supposed to do?

( Posted by: MuddyBraun [Member] On: July 13, 2011 )





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