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itIz kool tuRite
u kan Poest

26 Joon 2011

from: "hemdUp"
by edGee kayShawn
- aka BobbyG

[Poetico Press]

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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "jusae Know "
by Bobby7L

..parody? ..complete crap? ..opinion?

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 27, 2011 )

i don't know
but it made me chuckle...that's a good thing ;-)

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: June 28, 2011 )

made me hurril
maid me laff azz useyouall. I have one I wrote in my archive, if I can find it. will post. When turkeys Gobblers are strutting in the spring we call them all henned up. Nothing like fresh fried turkey breast to this hillbillies way of thinkin'.

later, Robert.


( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: June 28, 2011 )

reed miy phat koLeKchin
I was going to pen a rant/opinion or thread piece concerning grammatically challenged writing. This was an alternative.


There was a method to..
At least I actually represented/formed these words by and with intent.

The ostentatious utilization of all caps in titles and/or subject lines was not fully explored here. I was going to address that in a longer piece. Imagine what the homepage would look like if we all capped every letter..

Thanks for perusing

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 28, 2011 )

Any Which Wall
Hieroglyphical in nature but I think I would have enjoyed this more had you blown it up postersize, framed it and hung it on a wall

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 29, 2011 )



( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 29, 2011 )

u no what?
'my bad' drives me bananas!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: July 3, 2011 )

survival of the phattist
Another recent matter: Wrong Category

Just because you form a piece to look like a poem doesn't mean it is or make it so.

Editorial offerings/opinions are just that. Why they post at poetry [before they are noticed and moved by Chrispian]..who knows?

There is a way to represent current events/social commentary within a poetic offering. I've been doing it since I was fifteen.

Thanks for looking in..

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: July 3, 2011 )

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