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There’s a story of a place
Three heel clicks away
And I like to believe
This is where you are

With color swirling around your head
And playful laughter filling your ears
A world of your own to forever live in

No sadness here can penetrate you heart
Joy is forever abundant
In this place of rainbows

And I hope you are there
For I like to think you are happy now
Amongst the colors so dear to you

One day I will join you
Hand in hand we will live
Surrounded by your rainbows
Never to part again

-Dedicated to Meagan


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