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I wander through the wilderness
To get away from the bright lights
Of the city.
I have to slow down,
And catch my breath,
And not let my problems
Leave me buried in self-pity.

I need to smell the fresh air
And drink from the streams clear waters.
I need to clear my head
And put my life in order.
I must not let life's pains and
Stress get to me,
That is why I am sitting under this here tree,
And breathe God's fresh air and see all of
Life's beautiful visions that are right
In front of me,
In the wilderness,
For eternity.

Ronald Peter Ciras

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by moroccanron

Welcome to Your New
It's as if you discovered your Soul in an instant evoking a new vision of the World. Bravo!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 25, 2011 )

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