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Like Mothes Drawn to an Open Flame
We are Drawn to the Noise of a Restless Ego

� G.Dean Stevens

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The following comments are for "Adjust the Volume"
by awhippingflame

I didn't think
anyone could out-compress Bobby, but you did. This is almost flash poetry. digestible. something is in the water around here today. Good stuff.


( Posted by: williamhill [Member] On: June 21, 2011 )

You Feel Me
"Flash poetry" might be on to something there

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 21, 2011 )

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