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not so much a waste of skin
let me first
just begin

before I awake
and start to drift

away from something
wrapped as a gift

* * * *


all the way back
from Sinaloa

one hundred sixty pesos
bought a "La Barbie"

-not Iversoned
or Abercrombied


roll up to the spot
a sleek white Alpha

just like Arm & Hammer
making bank

wearing the look
menace sensed

used two hundred muscles
walked away

* * * *


still standing
past beyond
transcending ground

site detached
eyes closed
for looking around


grown-man jerseyed
James and Kobe
with blazed eyes

working hard to not get got
in zone of desire's lost action
survey future's rubble

* * * *


gulf to bay wares
premier wholesale produce
and coastal creations

wrapped chimineas
silent partnership
Guadalajara export

not sanctioned
but blessed

that which is
collected within bone

11 June 2011

* When arrested in Mexico City, American born Edgar Valdez Villarreal, aka "La Barbie," was wearing a $145.00 green Ralph Lauren "Big Pony" jersey. Following the arrest of Villarreal and six other drug bosses sporting various colours of the expensive jersey, knockoffs began appearing on the street for roughly 160 pesos [approximately $13.50]. Jose Jorge Balderas was wearing a blue version when arrested, hence the blue jerseys are being sold as "J.J.'s"

"Narco Polo" is now the fashion rage in the barrios throughout Mexico.

** This investigative fusion is a mix of new stuff with sampled lines from five vaulted pieces.

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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by Bobby7L

One of a kind!
Definetly a "Bobby" offering.

Thanks for the explanation!

Where DOES your mind're one of a kind!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: June 16, 2011 )

reporting from field
Thanks for perusing..

Perhaps, four decades of holophrastic compressions, along with reportorial snapshots, senryupsyched variations and investigative fusions, results in a style.

Looking up, around and within..


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 17, 2011 )

When Colors Fly
Well...some of us move through the World by dodging bullets.
Myself...I've become quite adept

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )

G Dean
Just because someone's tooled up doesn't mean they could hit the broad side of a shaker spot.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )

Got Skills ? know what they say:
"He who blasts last...blasts last"

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )

Mac Sick Skillage
G Dean,
see: Sicilian Karmic Infinity

Still standing,

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )

What's That Smell ?
Listen...if powder burn was a cologne...I could bottle that shit...!

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )

Hold your fire..
I'm sure there are mouthbreathers that would buy it.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )

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