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IN MY POET'S EYE
I can't say, where you are tonight.
I can't say, our love would have turned out right.
I don't know, but I do know,
you are still my love.

Every night I find I still reach for you.
Any time I pray, I still pray for you.
I don't know the reason,
But I know you're still a part of me.

In my poet's eye, I still see you here.
In my poet's world, I still feel you near.
I don't know the reason,
but I thought God meant this love to be.
I don't know the reason,
but I thought God meant our love to be.

In my poet's mind, you are mine again.
In my poet's heart you are here again.
In my poet's eye, you'll always be my love.

Every night I find I still reach for you.
I don't know the reason,
But I know you're still a part of me.

In my poet's eye, you'll always be my love.
In my poet's eye, you'll always be my love.
In my poet's eye, you are still my love.

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VeeBdosa
Fort Knox, KY


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The following comments are for "In My Poet's Eye"
by veebdosa

You Old Cumudgeon you!
Watch it Ron...your soft side is showing again! Written in a moment of weakness I bet! lol

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: June 14, 2011 )

In My Poets Eye
Thank you, Bea, that is very kind of you.
Actually this is the real, genuine, original and proven Vee Bdosa, kind,, thoughtful, generous, cuddly and bluer eyes than Jack Benny. If you remember him. LOL

Actually, this is also a song, one of the favorites I have written and recorded, and you can see the video of it on Youtube, search for Veebdosa then select POETS EYE. Enjoy, I dedicate it to Bea and everyone on Lit.com

It sounds like the real me, too.

( Posted by: veebdosa [Member] On: June 16, 2011 )

Sore Eyes
Hey...I've had a finger or two poked in my poet's eye as well

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: June 19, 2011 )





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