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I know my darkness
Can't let it out
Won't give it freedom
Or allow it to run about...

It can not roam
This darkness indeed
For the day I do
It'll be the unwinding of me

This huge black sadness
So much to hold!
It's my secret to bare
My darkness untold

It rots inside
Shackled and chained
Ever within
Forever to remain

Part of me
This is sad but true
But without it there
I'd be nothing but blue

But this part of me
With just a glance
Reminds me of me
And to have..., Or to fake,
A positive stance...

So once in a while
When no one is there
I let it peek out
It's all I can dare

Then pulled inside
It must then be
Till next time it's paroled
This darkness within me....

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