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Particle photon
through double slits concurrent --
Flash! Light is a wave.

The quickest way for me to learn something new is to first understand why I'd like to learn it.

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The following comments are for "Don't Look Now"
by Poeteye

truth of the matter
science minus hyperbole

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

Alternate Translations:
-- Thomas "Basho" Young
光子を同時に今見てはいけない --
フラッシュ! ライトは波である。

A single photon
past two slits at the same time
Splash! Light becomes waves.

The ancient photon
travels two parallel slits –
Signal! Wave patterns!

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

One more version

The lone, quantum bit
Unlike Frost, chooses both paths,
Interferes with self.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

science art
when science crosses with art

I've tried to write a poem about mathematical thoery for years, just can't find the right formula.


( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

Try This One:

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

Just in case you're unsure
I got your pun, Brian.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

too funny!
Interferes with self! loved that!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

succinct haiku on light waves :) I love the clinical indifference of the words used and yet the japanese translation speaks volumes and is mellifluous spoken out loud.thanks for this

( Posted by: shakti [Member] On: May 28, 2011 )

condensed volumes
Thank you, Shakti. I found it most interesting that the Japanese for Light and Write are the same.

( Posted by: Poeteye [Member] On: May 29, 2011 )

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