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Newton's invention
gravity balanced orbs
universe of mass
attraction
reactions
careening
ordered chaos
law created
law mandated
no sense thinking
any more
we stared into the sky
in the dark
afraid we didn't know
better to make it up
than to not know
apple headed
gravity and...
what if it's all electrical
the sun and stars
the planets and moons
engines
creating fields
charge and discharge
connected
interconnected
everything
matter to matter
life to life
new science
new thought
new frontier
an electrical universe
more to come


ken lehnig(c)2011

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Why is doing what you love the hardest thing to do? Is it because failing what you thought defined you would be too devastating a thing from which to recover? If so, we stay where mere accident has left us.


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The following comments are for "Not In Stone"
by jonpenny

sciences
Ken

It connects in an odd way, but pretty cool. I think the line breaks weaken it a little, but might just be me.

What if it....I way it all comes down to energy no matter what science is applied

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: May 24, 2011 )

not in stone
Thank you!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 25, 2011 )

plasmaphrastic cosmology
"not in stone.." ..indeed

experience enjoyed

trek on

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 30, 2011 )

not in stone
Thanks my friend!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 31, 2011 )

With a name like Ken
... I guess you'd hafta know. I disagree with Brian about the line breaks. It made me read it as a rap song. I've never heard you perform, but I somehow thought that rap was stepping out of your comfort zone. However, this piece works. "Apple headed," made me smile. I'd sing this in my car.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: June 1, 2011 )

Not in stone2poeteye
So sorry I missed this. I actually wrote this with you in mind (honoring you in fact) - pleased that it tickled you! Thanks my friend!

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: June 22, 2011 )





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