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You can let go of the shutters
the storm will pass
these winds will calm
the rain will stop
the waters will recede

And you will still
be radiant in the sunlight
and I will still owe you more
than I can ever return

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The following comments are for "You Were Right"
by rancidsauce

you were right
Simple Clean and wonderful

( Posted by: jonpenny [Member] On: May 22, 2011 )

Very appropriate for the recent floods (that I only see on the news -- very dry where I reside).

It is like a soothing plea -- "please be calm, we'll be alright. We can overcome if we stick it out."


( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: May 22, 2011 )

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