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extra alien
cosmic codependency
stellar immigrant

15 May 2011

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "landing in Baja"
by Bobby7L

landing on Zona
met no resistance
inhabitants back away
proceeding forward

16 May 2011

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 16, 2011 )

they live among us..
enjoyed bobby

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: May 16, 2011 )

parallel stories..
Our perceived position in the universe has been tragically comical, if not delusional.

Thanks Tina

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 16, 2011 )

what did I miss?
I was sure I'd caught all the news lately .. something tells me this island dweller is out of the loop .. wait .. maybe that's a good thing!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: May 17, 2011 )

Baja Zona
Once we learn to dematerialize, becoming energy unmassed, going elsewhere at the speed of light [or faster], we'll hopefully have also found means to transcend our prevailing mode of quarrel and hypocrisy.

Of course, there's a metaphorical level within these stories.

Thanks for trekking by.

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 17, 2011 )

A Dutiful Spaceman
we uphold consciousness...
it's our stellar duty

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: May 15, 2016 )

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