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I spend half my life
Just waiting for the bus.
I can't drive,
So a stranger
I must trust,
To take me anywhere that
I want to go.
Though, I want to go fast,
The driver wants to go slow.

I spend half my life,
Just following my dreams.
Just trying to find success
In my life,
By whatever means.
That is how I live,
Each and everyday,
Just waiting for the bus
And trying to find
Success along the way.

Ronald Peter Ciras

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thanks for sharing.

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: May 13, 2011 )

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