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I wish I could agree
your tenet
your mantra
your scripted get well soon
"Things will work themselves out."
stings in my ears
like the shot that splattered Chris's head on the wall.

Sometimes the road back out is too hard
when no one is holding your hand anymore.
I could never have done 10 miles on my own.

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The following comments are for "It's a Long Hike Back From California"
by rancidsauce

Dark edge
Very edgy piece. If I read it quickly it has a couple of tripping spots, but still very edgy writing.


( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: May 12, 2011 )

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