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What more can the moon do
as it circles the earth
to hide its jealousy of the sun?

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The following comments are for "The Moon"
by Happykafka

This poem gives me quite a smile and chuckle. Thanks for reawakening my passion for the lost art of haiku.

( Posted by: ochimusha [Member] On: May 11, 2011 )

Old theme, well presented
It's got emotion and it's cosmic. I, too, want to label it haiku.

( Posted by: poeteye [Member] On: May 13, 2011 )

senryupsyched poem
"You'll forget the sun in his jealous sky.." - Sting

"and we all shine the moon and the stars and the sun" - John Lennon


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 17, 2011 )

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