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war of temporary destiny
through flash and smoke
amongst the flowers

lacking immunity
the natives are doomed
their books are burned


along with the wild animals
they flee the conquistadores
steel carries the day

ceramics are left behind
painted almanacs
of rituals and constellations

as Venus cycles coronations
rising above final campaigns
before it's time to transit the Sun


other tribes are coming
change sweeps westward again
more paper is flashed

the eldest daughter of the Church
relinquishes her Catholicism
while inscripted monuments stand elsewhere

April 30, 2011

To view accompanying photographs, see this piece on my Facebook page [link here at bio].

below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011

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The following comments are for "the screen-folded dreams"
by Bobby7L

enjoyed here as on Facebook (with photos)
wonderful bobby

( Posted by: cmsmuse [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

sometimes the natives get got
..and sometimes the natives get you.


( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

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( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 4, 2011 )

login at comments
I can't login at control or on homepage..
Perhaps, there is work in progress?

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 4, 2011 )

Yes Bobby!
I believe so Bobby...Chris said he was going to be working on the site. We still can get on and comment, but we just can't log in!


( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: May 4, 2011 )

Chrispian: Good to go..

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 4, 2011 )

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