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fluent in Pirate
no affirmative action
shipjacking gangster




April 30, 2011
sailin' dirty

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below the subliminal
deep within manipulation
that's where tr^th resides

2 Dec 2011






























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The following comments are for "Red Sea Resume"
by Bobby7L

who's the pirate
hmmm .. my mind went to a specific incident and yet I'm certain it could be taken in a whole different context by another reader which makes for excellent writing. For, as always, it's the mind of the recipient which should be engaged - usually better when it isn't collective mind control.

still on the mend Bobby ...

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

fluent in Pirate
Penelope,
I hope you are feeling better.

Indeed, there are several levels to this senryupsyched offering. It's open to transliteration.

One man's pirate is another man's treasure.

Thanks

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

speaking of pirates
I posted a photo of pirates plus token parrot on Facebook this morning .. odd coincidence ... wot? I did it because of Kaycee's request on my comment on her rant.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

of Pirates and Parrot
Commented there- Priceless

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

thanks for asking
yes .. I am feeling sooo much better .. dealing with a chronic problem that I'd been ignoring up until Friday when it became impossible. Won't be dropping into the bar due to meds not being compatible with spirits and I'm just not one of those who needs company when I'm convalescing .. quite the opposite ...

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

certificate of death
now sleeps with the fish
former CIA asset
got Moe "shaha" Greene'd



2 May 2011

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

doing a Donald?
trump that is ...

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )

served cold
other side vendetta..

epitaphico

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: May 2, 2011 )





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