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bolts of inky blue
engaged in bold repartee
cedar limbs snap back

Penelope Allen
April 23/2011

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"Tigers bloom where there's oodles of room." Zodiac Zoo


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The following comments are for "contrast"
by Pen

Boom Bang Bing
dig it

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 24, 2011 )

Not Today
Haha I wish

It's Wet and cold this Sunday........

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: April 24, 2011 )

@ Bobby & Fairplay
Thanks Bobby! :-)

um ... Fairplay? [Eric] .. I saw this image early yesterday morning and it inspired me to write this haiku .. while the rain came a few hours later the Stellar jays' moods are never dampened by the rain.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 25, 2011 )





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