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I AM A TREE, PLANTED IN A PLAYGROUND PARK. WHERE CHILDREN SWING FROM MY LIMBS, WHERE THE GREENERY OF MY LIMBS
AND LEAVES GIVE OFF SHADE ON A HEATED
SUMMER DAY. WHERE OCCASIONALLY A DOG
USE ME FOR OTHER PURPOSES
STILL I AM A TREE, STANDING BOLDLY BY
GOD'S GIVEN GRACE . I AM A TREE, UNDER
THE BEAUTIFUL HEAVENLY SKIES
I AM A TREE, THAT GIVE GOD THANKS FOR
HIS GIVEN STRENGTH. I AM A TREE, IN A
WORLD AND EARTH THAT GOD CREATED AND
GAVE TO MANKIND. ARE YOU A TREE?
THAT BREATHE GOD'S BEAUTY ON OTHERS YOU
MEET. PEOPLE STANDS WITH BOLDNESS LIKE A TREE. ESPECIALLY THOSE WITH GOD'S
BELIEF, AND FAITH IN HIS WORD. WHERE EVER WE ARE PLANTED BY GOD,OUR PURPOSE
WILL GIVE OFF LOVE AND ALL FOR HIS PURPOSE AND PLEASURE, TO BE HIS TREE,
EVERY WHERE WE GO. I AM A TREE.
AREN'T WE ALL TREES THAT BELIEVE IN GOD
ALMIGHTY, THROUGH CHRIST JESUS

------
JOSEPH MATTHEW BREWSTER


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The following comments are for ""TREE""
by JOSEPH58

Tree
Now, you can write me a poem like this.
This is a master piece. I love the words
and what they stand for. {{super}} The
words is what captivating to me
Glory! Glory!
I see your reward is coming soon.

( Posted by: JEANNIE45 [Member] On: August 4, 2003 )

Caps?
Nice poem, but why must you write with the caps lock on?

( Posted by: False Dawn [Member] On: August 4, 2003 )

Penelope
Thank you Penelope. I will surely
watch my caps.

( Posted by: JOSEPH58 [Member] On: August 5, 2003 )

Tree
may be good for cards; but not literary. I think.
Still, in a commercialized world it will sell. People will like it.

( Posted by: webguy [Member] On: August 6, 2003 )

Tree
The caps lock blew away the rhythm, the contents seemed like a childish fantasy or some tacky narrative from an aging hippy.

( Posted by: Adrian Shepard [Member] On: July 9, 2004 )





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