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Oh yeah come onto me now
Just take me out of my head
And far, far away from here
Oh, oh mon ami
My Sangria
Take me away

I've been hangin' by a thread here
Hittin' rock bottom all the same
Still just holdin' that torch for her
Oh, oh mon ami
My Sangria
Fills all my days

I left her high on the hog
Ever since been good as dead
High and dry all on my own
Oh, oh mon ami
My Sangria
Let's me just play

I've just been searchin' high and low
Even if I ain't got no home
I'm just leavin' it up to you
Oh, oh mon ami
My Sangria
Shows me the way

After she tore me apart
Just wanna let it all loose
Makes me forget my savin' grace
Oh, oh mon ami
My Sangria
Fills all my days

Oh yeah come onto me now
Just take me out of my head
And far, far away from here
Oh, oh mon ami
My Sangria
Take me away








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The following comments are for "SANGRIA "
by MTMarshall

Sangria
Well .. the title was a sure-fire hook for me .. seeing as I'm partial to the summer drink which is refreshing and healthy because of the fruit juice and has a kick because of the red wine.

Imagine my surprise when you used it as a name .. or did you? Could be like the Red Red Wine ... but more enticing because of your use of Sangria which is delicious.

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

Sangria
Thank you so Pen...I am very pleased you enjoyed this piece. I loved the sound of "Sangria" and felt it had/has a very lyrical quality or ring to it. I am using it as the wine here not a name but it can be taken that way. It is up to the reader/listener as to how it works for them mor so I feel it is.. And yes "Red,Red Wine" is a brilliant song...A truly wonderful melody etc.. "Sangria" has a delicious sound to it even and that really is what I was playing off of along with connecting or tapping into the sound into something with meaning/slight storyline..... Have to say glad the fonts worked this time too... I'm assuming they did well since you made no mention of them...lol :)))))Xxx

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

Maria
I'm glad to hear that you meant it the way I took it ...

Have you dropped by Bobby's bar? I bet he'd be thrilled to have you do a guest appearance at the mic and seeing as there's Sangria fans there .. this song would be a treat to hear in the virtual sense.

:-)

no weird font sightings here and yes .. I'd mention it if there were .. how would you know otherwise?

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

Sangria
Pen I don't even know where Bobby's bar is but i don't think me singing in public is a very good idea.. .. I live in the Los Angeles area too. I assuming the bar is near Ken south of me. I could be wrong.... Belwo are tow links for tow of my songs that were record if you would like to hear them Now the band is out of Finland so there is a accent... Also Pen are you on Facebook?? If you are let me know... Xxx

Link for "Sandman:

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/les-peugeots/sandman/428664/

Link for "Crystal Rain"

http://www.mikseri.net/artists/les-peugeots/crystal-rain/449160/

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

Bobby's bar
Maria! Bobby's is right here at Lit!

G's Liquid Offerings

I figured if you post lyrics here you might fancy a virtual bar to sing them in. :-)

Yes, I am on Facebook. Penelope Allen - Ladysmith ... lets see ... um .. hang on for the direct link so it's easier for you to find me .. wait ..

Penelope Allen fb

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

Bobby's bar
LOL I think I must be n the dark ages lately.. I look for Bobby's Bar.. I found you on Facebook on Ken's page and sent you a friend request not so long ago.. Xxx

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

Maria
Bobby's bar is ... G's Liquid Offerings .. it's my fault for calling it something it's not listed as on the LitOrg marquee .. hopefully .. with this comment .. and the blue highlighted link on my comment above and the FB link message I sent you .. you'll be able to locate it. My apologies for sending you around the town looking for a drink. ;-)

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

thanks a bunch
okay Maria .. Limerick is posted at Bobby's Bar ...

comment title - Limerick for Maria

thanks for letting me do this ...

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: April 20, 2011 )

Lyric with Punch
"Sangria"..a cool personification

enjoyed experience

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 20, 2011 )

Lyric with Punch
Thank you Bobby... Glad you enjoyed this ..:))

( Posted by: MTMarshall [Member] On: April 20, 2011 )





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