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I love his blindfolds,
name rhyming with my pleasure,
- Why aren't we married?


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Good things wait for those who know what they are doing


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The following comments are for "Flonigus"
by VickieSALT

Half-way 'round the world, but right here.
Vickie,

I am honored by your haiku. I'm sure it would be pleasure for me.

Thank you for this image (I can even taste/smell it, deliciously) and for your recent comments on some of my posts.

~ John

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: April 13, 2011 )

Flonigus Yummius
Am I glad you liked this one! Now I need to read more of your imagistic work. Intellectually, spiritually, erotically.

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 14, 2011 )

a blessing
I really like the relationship between these two. Haikus as well. A new source of emotions, impressions, images. Run with it!

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: April 21, 2011 )

Vingt-venventre-voile!
why can't I manage to include a mention of the season? - I would really like to pack that with mention of a natural element - to make it a true peaceful haiku. Can you find the samples (emails? URL's) you used to show me?

so - I can have your blessing, then. Will you watch?

I KNOW that makes you smile.

your SALT, her Tori :-)
\\\\V////

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: May 14, 2011 )

front seat
You have my blessing any time. From what I have found out, I'll be a fool if I did not grab a front seat. i sure hope you know what you are doing. I think I still have the links, will email.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: May 21, 2011 )

vie en rose - now!
I am so calm. I do things right - when I ignore earthlings's advice. I have no fear. - I feel great. Thank you for being there on the sidelines, just like my husband - I have thought of his feelings too. - I don't know if I am coming back. I'll let him see the kids. I consume esthetics art: girlfriend's music, Walden, Dostoyevsky, and Flonigus' collected works - that i've made for myself :-) -and your comments!

Mwuah - sloppy and naughty!

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: May 25, 2011 )





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