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As you walk down the stairs,

sentimental breeze is swinging in the air

Sound of music is playing the song from your shining heart

The place is enlightened by the mesmerizing look in your eyes

Every step forward plants your destined future

with promising dreams and hopes

of happy life granted by your blooming petals of love .


The sweet is never as sweet without the sour, and I know the sour which allows me to appreciate the sweet.

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The following comments are for "Pour Elle "
by fairgrace

Vivo per lei..
"Pour Elle"..anything for her, indeed.

You put reader the moment..
Very sweet.

experience enjoyed

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: April 11, 2011 )

You poetry and the vierge
when I was exposed to this sort of poetry, je suis passe de vierge à maîtresse vorace.

i.e., I went from being a virgin, to a voracious lover.


( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 13, 2011 )

With Plucking Passion
She tosses her inhibitions to the wind
With every pluck of her blooming petals...
......Of Love

( Posted by: awhippingflame [Member] On: October 10, 2011 )

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