- published: April 11, 2011
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Secret: I make love
with my perfect soft girlfriend
who lives in mirrors.
Good things wait for those who know what they are doing
Cute night music
Sorry for Japan
TNT: Night and Day
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A-lice behind the mirror?
Again, this one is too private. Like Toscano said, it is between you and Jojo maybe?
I know of your erotic mirror principle. You had to preface it soemhow, maybe by writing this as the second of a double haiku.
It seems like you cannot comment or post due to revenge. Sorry for recommending this place? You forgive me?
] On: April 20, 2011
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