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Those bumps in the night
measure beats to my yummy
vocal night music

and there's always hope
that someone would come and ask
"Guys can I join you?"

Good things wait for those who know what they are doing

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The following comments are for "Cute night music"
by VickieSALT

+ one?
Steam here. Not for everyone, but moonlight on the skin of erotica.

( Posted by: Flonigus [Member] On: April 11, 2011 )

this is the only episode of Twilight Zone I have ever seen - "There's always room for one more"

The +1 idea is always in the back of my mind during my musical night moves

thank you for enjoying it!

your Torrid Tori

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: April 11, 2011 )

Signs and secrets
I am signed in.
It's obvious.
Try again.
Let's see.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )

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