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After night with man
I need latte, croissant and
cuddly day with you

(Thoughts of Toscano, Nae and Tori)

Good things wait for those who know what they are doing

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The following comments are for "TNT: Night and Day"
by VickieSALT

EZ hi coo
who you are writing to? it is not clear to me. To a woman or to the woman.
I love the EZ-twist in your flow. I am wondering as to why there are no comments here. It's a shame that … Oh, wait!

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: April 19, 2011 )
I always wanted you to be the spectator in such a situation. Voyeur, that is.
I've just left my husband... It's bigger than it sounds - Maybe the original idea is more likely to happen now? If she unlocks your chastity belt, that is. You have my respect though, for saving your own marriage. "She is not into threesomes, but she's pretty" – hey!
Your No. 1 Exhibitionist, and S*A*L*T*

( Posted by: VickieSALT [Member] On: May 20, 2011 )

gin rummy
it's like playing cards. No wonder you didn't like that game. I say, women are either into cards or threesomes. Now, how does one unlearn blackjack? I am watching from afar, and thank you for your blog outtakes.

( Posted by: Teflon [Member] On: May 21, 2011 )

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