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Mole
tunnels out of the earth
into the warm sunlight
I bask in my Weirdness

Eagle
soars, circles,
swoops, clutches
Enjoying my Predator status

Slinking in and out of mountain caves, crevices
senses heighten as young, tender morsels of man appear
Moi?
Cougar

------
Kacee Huggs


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The following comments are for "MORPHIFIED"
by Nitz Kitty

creeps up on me
Excellent turn of the pen with that last stanza.

I like this, right in my wheel house as they say. Hits all the nature buttons I like; dirt, caves soaring, sunlight, weirdness, caves, crevices.

Moi? Ha...love that little "gotcha" statement.

BW

( Posted by: BWOz [Member] On: March 21, 2011 )

of seamless transitions
Kacee,
unique qualities of perspective here..

good to read you again

salute

( Posted by: Bobby7L [Member] On: March 22, 2011 )

Hi Kacee!
Soo good to read you again Kacee...you never dissapoint!

Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: March 22, 2011 )

Thanking 3 "B"s
Brian, Bobby, and Bea,
I really appreciate your taking the time to read my ramblings. The comments are far better than the poem...I just can't control that muse of mine...Thanks to all of you...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: March 22, 2011 )

Lucie
I love when I can bring you into the poem with me...Glad you enjoyed it...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: March 24, 2011 )

*cougar*
Have you ever wondered why there are so many slang terms to label women? I do all the time! I love cougars but don't want to be thought of as one .. just seems as if men always want to be the innocent. blah! *waves at you!*

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: March 24, 2011 )

Meow!
Pen, No way am I looking for a younger man. I'm done wiping noses and changing diapers...That fantasy belongs to my muse...But I'd rather be a cougar than kitty bait.Thanks for stopping by to read me and congrats on your book...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: March 24, 2011 )





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