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Inch wide small time simplicity
Diagrams that diagnose fuck knows
Sound bytes highlight my life
I thought i knew The Score
Seems Mozart got here before

Me


Wrote a fuckin symphony
Sounds good a little tight
Like the ass wipes who pay for this shite
Hold on here we go that was a rhyme
Canít have this rhyme in time verse
Modern poetry has to be perverse



Me?




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The following comments are for "Inch Wide"
by Gordon

I need all the help I can get...
this one, I have to admit, is going right over my head. Its a voice I'm not familiar with; can I ask that you help me understand this?

( Posted by: pablowilliams [Member] On: March 23, 2011 )

Laughed myself sick!
Gotta say this just tickled me Gordon! Then I went and wrote another set of lyrics to the March Song Challenge .. thanks for the inspiration Comrade!

( Posted by: Pen [Member] On: March 24, 2011 )

Pens sick
Knew you would get it to my other commentors have another look its meant to be er humourous a poke at the establishment et al.
G.

( Posted by: Gordon [Member] On: March 24, 2011 )

Modern poetry has to be perverse
To my near-blind third eye, this reads little like yin and yang. Two sides of the same person. Slightly off center mirror images, if you will. One is confused about his place in the world and the other convinced of it.

...Sometimes I reach a little further than necessary.

( Posted by: toscano [Member] On: April 2, 2011 )





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